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There are many methods of marketing is available you can choose TV radio or internet. TV advertisements are much costly than raido comercials. No need to spend a lot on marketing campaign. Radio is a trend that continues grows. Radio can be more effective then a ad on TV. Email marketing is nice to. It automatic sends newsletter clients on your list. Email a great way to market your products quick. These strategies is one way business people can market there business.

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There are many methods of marketing available, you can choose TV, radio, or the internet.

TV advertisements are much more costly than radio commercials, but there is no need to spend a lot on marketing campaigns. Radio is a trend that continues to grow, and can be more effective then an ad on TV.

Email marketing is nice too, it automatically sends newsletters to clients on your list. Email is a great way to market your products quickly.

These strategies are examples of how business people can market their businesses.

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