August 21

by Anna
(Studio City, CA, USA)

Original Text: August 21

I have decided to write a journal every day. I think it will help me to figure out where I need to improve. It is about Isabel and Jonathon. We are still waiting for more teeth with Isabel. Jonathon’s school will start on September 7th.

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Revised Text:

I have decided to write a journal every day. I think it will help me figure out where I need to improve.

It is about Isabel and Jonathon. We are still waiting for more teeth for Isabel. Jonathon’s school will start on September 7th

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