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Baby

Original Text:

i know this isnt a baby shower card but it was too cute not to get. i wish you all the luck even though you wont need it, your going to be an amazing mom.Words cant describe the amount of love that is going to surround this baby. i love you and am always here if you ever need anything.

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Revised Text:

I know this isn't a baby shower card, but it was too cute not to recieve. I wish you all the luck, even though you won't need it. You're going to be an amazing mom. Words can't describe the amount of love that is going to surround this baby.

I love you and am always here if you ever need anything.

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