Babysitting

Original Text: Babysitting

I’m a nursing student in college, and have been babysitting on an off for about 3 years now, I love the kids and the experience, I started out babysitting my cousin’s children and I utterly like doing it. To do a job like this you absolutely must love children and even though I don’t have any of my own I really adore those little faces.

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Revised Text:

I’m a nursing student in college, and have been babysitting on an off for about 3 years now. I love the kids and the experience.

I started out babysitting my cousin’s children, and I completely enjoy doing it. To do a job like this, you absolutely must love children, and even though I don’t have any of my own, I really adore those little faces.

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