Barley

by Uiui
(Nigeria)

Original Text: Barley


Engels (1994) investigated an association of phenotypic traits (including phenology) and altitude in large barley collections of Ethiopian origin and he found that much of the variation was attributed to altitudinal variation within regions than geographic regions per se.

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Revised Text:

Engels (1994) investigated the association of phenotypic traits (including phenology) and altitude in large barley collections of Ethiopian origin, and found that much of the variation was attributed to altitudinal variations within regions, rather than geographic regions per se.

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