BBQ Chicken

Original Text: BBQ Chicken


The way to do my bbq chicken. All you need are a can of beer, cup of water, bbq sauce,and pack of chicken. First you need to open the can of beer and pour it in the baking sheet. Then you open the pack of chicken, and put it in the baking sheet. Spread it out. Then you pour cup of water on top the chicken. Then let it soak about three hours. Then you turn on the oven to 350 degree and let it preheat it. Then put the chicken in the oven until it is golden brown color. Then you put it out of oven. Then you open the bbq sauce and pour it on top of the chicken and put it back in the oven until it complete done. The last thing to do is serve up and eat it all up.

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Revised Text:

How to do my BBQ chicken.

All you need are a can of beer, a cup of water, BBQ sauce and pack of chicken. First you need to open the can of beer and pour it on the baking sheet. Then, you open the pack of chicken and put it in the baking sheet, spreading it out. Next, pour cup of water over the chicken and let it soak for about three hours.

Then, turn on the oven to 350 degree and let it preheat. Put the chicken in the oven and bake until it is a golden brown color then take it out. Open the BBQ sauce and pour it on top of the chicken then put it back in the oven until it is completely done.

The last thing to do is to serve it and eat it all up.

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