Bio

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Nancy relocated to San Antonio, fourteen years ago from Washington, D.C. She specializes in helping her clients move up or downsize to a home that fits their needs. Nancy believes strongly in education and puts that to work for you, providing accurate analysis and strong advice for buyers and sellers. Her goal is for all parties in the transaction to feel it’s a “Win-Win” and to be your “Realtor for Life.”

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Nancy relocated to San Antonio fourteen years ago from Washington, D.C. She specializes in helping her clients move up, or downsize, to a home that fits their needs. Nancy believes strongly in education and puts that to work for you, providing accurate analysis and strong advice for both buyers and sellers. Her goal is for all parties in the transaction to feel that it’s a “Win-Win” situation.

She wants to be your “Realtor for Life.”

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