Biography

by Lynn
(NH)

Original Text: Biography


Lynn is our Dental Assistant. She began her hands on dental assistant training in 1999 and recieved certifications from NHTI. As a young girl she enjoyed her visits to the dentist. Each time she sat in the patient's chair, ackward silence never occured. The dentist and his assistant enjoyed responding to Lynn's inquistiveness. Lynn's admiration towards dentistry led her to assist. Outside of work Lynn is a single mom of two daughters. She enjoys spending time with her family and serving God.

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Revised Text:

Lynn is our Dental Assistant. She began her hands-on dental assistant training in 1999 and received certification from NHTI.

As a young girl, she enjoyed her visits to the dentist. When she sat in the patient's chair, awkward silences never occurred. The dentist and his assistant enjoyed responding to Lynn's inquisitiveness. Lynn's admiration for dentistry led her to assist.

Outside of work Lynn is a single mom of two daughters. She enjoys spending time with her family and serving God.

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