Blogging

Original Text: Blogging


So this blogging experience is not going as well as I thought. Having to blog at least three times a week and remembering to post to at least three other classmates blogs is getting rather aggravating. I log on everyday and post comments and or create a new blog, but yet I am not doing something right some how. I thought I understood how to do this, and I thought that I might actually like the whole blogging experience; but this is not the case. After over a week of work I did not receive a good grade. Four small mechanical grades and some sort of confusion of posting days leads me to a non-passing grade. I don't know what I am doing wrong? I just can't seem to get this whole blogging down pact. After several weeks in class, my opinion is still correct; I do not like blogging!

For everyone that is reading this, I have a question. When we have to post three times a week, do this mean to the same original post? Or does this mean that we have to create three entirely different posts throughout the week? I have heard several different answers and really need clarification. Please help!

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So, this blogging experience is not going as well as I had thought. Having to blog at least three times a week, and remembering to post to at least three other classmates blogs is getting rather aggravating. I log on every day and post comments and/or create a new blog, but yet, I am not doing it right somehow.

I thought I understood how to do this, and I thought that I might actually like the whole blogging experience, but this is not the case. After more than a week of work, I did not receive a good grade. Four small mechanical grades and some sort of confusion about posting days led me to a non-passing grade. I don't know what I am doing wrong. I just can't seem to get this whole blogging thing down pat. After several weeks in class, my opinion is still the same; I do not like blogging!

For everyone reading this, I have a question. When we have to post three times a week, does this mean to the same original post, or does this mean that we have to create three entirely different posts during the week? I have heard several different answers and really need clarification.

Please help!

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