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Breathe One’s Last
by Leciram
The breaking of dawn Scrounged my soul with fear The fiery scene of death Upheld me so near. Hovering the silence Wondering what’s next Praying for a sign Calming my self from grim. Agonizing in pain Thanatos and his icy glare Ensnared in his shadows Clasping on his wings. Longing is lengthy biting the dust is fifthly eyes without the light Despise the soul in me. The waiting is over truth that scared me most the light would not strike at dawn Hush.. love anchors my soul. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Revised Text: The breaking of dawn scrounged my soul with fear. The fiery scene of death upheld me so near. Hovering, the silence. Wondering what’s next. Praying for a sign, calming my self from the grim. Agonizing in pain. Thanatos and his icy glare. Ensnared in his shadows, clasping on his wings. Longing is lengthy, biting the dust is fifthly. Eyes without the light Despise the soul in me. The waiting is over. Truth that scared me most, the light would not strike at dawn. Hush.. love anchors my soul. Editor: 1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed. 2. Before you leave this page, please take a moment to use the "Click here to post comments." link at the bottom of the page to rate the proofreading and leave a comment if you wish. Proofreading and editing pages that receive ratings and comments are moved to the top of the list. |