Home
Writing Help Free Proofreading
Search
2010 Archive
2011 Archive #1
2011 Archive #2
Questions?
Resource Books
Online Resources
Writing Basics The Words
More Words
The Structure
Punctuation
Get Organized
Writing Style
Website Information Contribute
New Additions
Privacy Policy
Off The Record
About Me
Sitemap
Tell your story
Subscribe To This Site
XML RSS
Add to Google
Add to My Yahoo!
Add to My MSN
Subscribe with Bloglines
 

Briefing

Original Text: Briefing

Silver Cafe would like to offer 15% discount off the total bill to all students and staff during the Champions League Football Match tonight night – Real Madrid vs Barcelona.

If Doha College is mentioned when ordering the discount will be given.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Revised Text:

Silver Cafe would like to offer a 15% discount off the total bill to all students and staff during the Champions League Football Match tonight, Real Madrid vs Barcelona.

If Doha College is mentioned when ordering, the discount will be given.

Editor:

1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed.

2. Before you leave this page, please take a moment to use the "Click here to post comments." link at the bottom of the page to rate the proofreading and leave a comment if you wish.


Proofreading and editing pages that receive ratings and comments are moved to the top of the list.

Click here to post comments.