Briefing

Original Text: Briefing


Silver Cafe would like to offer 15% discount off the total bill to all students and staff during the Champions League Football Match tonight night – Real Madrid vs Barcelona.

If Doha College is mentioned when ordering the discount will be given.

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Revised Text:

Silver Cafe would like to offer a 15% discount off the total bill to all students and staff during the Champions League Football Match tonight, Real Madrid vs Barcelona.

If Doha College is mentioned when ordering, the discount will be given.

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