Business Services

by Davit Muradyan
(Yerevan, Armenia)

Original Text: Business Services


After at least a year of enterprise kick-off the start-up entrepreneur needs more specialized and narrow-oriented knowledge to shift from start-up status to established. Business development services are provided in communities where once the “Successful Start” programme has been implemented. The services are based on the entrepreneurs’ needs.


Micro franchising is a development tool providing easily replicable enterprise opportunities with proven operation concepts to help alleviate poverty, enhance individual economic self-reliance, and stimulate individual, community and country economic development.


The objective is identifying viable ideas of start-up entrepreneurs and coaching them through the process of enterprise establishment. It is not necessary to have economic educational background to participate in “Successful Start” programme. The start-ups gain necessary knowledge and skills for enterprise establishment during 18 months of programme duration. Entrepreneurs from planned or functioning small and medium sized enterprises are involved in the programme. The programme provides with opportunity to receive a preferential credit.

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Revised Text:

After at least a year of enterprise experience, the start-up entrepreneur needs more specialized and narrowly focused knowledge to shift from start-up status to being established. Business development services are provided in communities where the “Successful Start” programme has been implemented. These services are based on the entrepreneurs’ needs.

Micro-franchising is a development tool providing easily replicable enterprise opportunities with proven operating concepts to help alleviate poverty, enhance individual economic self-reliance, and stimulate individual, community and country economic development.

The objective is to identify viable ideas of start-up entrepreneurs and coaching them through the process of enterprise establishment. It is not necessary to have an economics educational background to participate in the “Successful Start” programme. The start-ups gain necessary knowledge and skills for enterprise establishment during the 18 months of the programme duration.

Entrepreneurs in planned or functioning small and medium sized enterprises are involved in this programme, which also provides an opportunity to receive a preferential credit.

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Sep 03, 2010
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by: Davit Muradyan

Dear Editor,
Thank you very much for helping me to improve my English language skills by editing and proofreading my text. I will tell my friends about this wonderful site.

Yours faithfully,

Davit Muradyan

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