Calculation

by FJ

Original Text:


This calculation indicates that with increasing of the Hammett constants of para subsitutents the charge transfer energy decreases.

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Revised Text:

This calculation indicates that with the increasing of the Hammett constants of para-subsitutents, the charge transfer energy decreases.

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