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Calculation

by FJ

Original Text:

This calculation indicates that with increasing of the Hammett constants of para subsitutents the charge transfer energy decreases.

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Revised Text:

This calculation indicates that with the increasing of the Hammett constants of para-subsitutents, the charge transfer energy decreases.

Editor:

1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed.

2. I'm not familiar with the word "subsitutents" but did not change it, assuming it to be an accepted special jargon.

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