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Challenge Day

by Soham

Original Text: Challenge Day

I think challenge day would be succesful at riverside because I always see some people are walking alone in the school, so I think this special day will make them confident.

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Revised Text:


I think a Challenge Day would be successful at Riverside because I always see some people walking alone in the school.

I think this special day will make them confident.

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