Challenge Day
by Soham
Original Text: Challenge DayI think challenge day would be succesful at riverside because I always see some people are walking alone in the school, so I think this special day will make them confident.
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Revised Text:I think a Challenge Day would be successful at Riverside because I always see some people walking alone in the school.
I think this special day will make them confident.
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