Church Goers

Original Text: Church Goers


Today, church has change in many ways. Church goers can be grouped as spirit filled, bench warmers, and hypocrites. These are the aspects of how church goers are not always good examples for non believers.
Spirit filled church goers are the life of the church. One way he or she be spirit is at church. Another word for spirit filled is the Holy Spirit. The Holy Spirit is one of the three persons of God: Father, son and the Holy Spirit. Whoever is spirit filled can receive the Holy Spirit and it will be active in their life everyday.
Some church goers are just bench warmers in today’s society. Beach warmers are people who sit in church and not be moved by the atmosphere of the service. For many years bench warmer have been attending church to criticize. So many people just come to church to say that they came. Those beach warmers nee to give up the sit and give it to a person that wants to receive a word from the Lord. There are a lot of bench warmers that come to church today.

There are hypocrites in the church today. Hypocrites are pretending to be something while actually being something else is wrong. For example, a person trying to be Christ like. In today’s church, there are a lot of hypocrites that are playing church and they are not fooling God. One day, if the hypocrites do not starting being a true Christian, they will be accountable for their mistakes.
This would be a good example for non believers because they will not .

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Revised Text:

Today, church has changed in many ways. Church goers can be grouped as; spirit filled, bench warmers, and hypocrites. These aspects of church goers are not always good examples for non-believers.

Spirit filled church goers are the life of the church. One way he or she can be spirit filled is at church. Another word for "spirit filled" is the Holy Spirit. The Holy Spirit is one of the three persons of God; Father, Son and the Holy Spirit. Whoever is spirit filled can receive the Holy Spirit and it will be active in their life everyday.

Some church goers are just bench warmers in today’s society. Beach warmers are people who sit in church and are not moved by the atmosphere of the service. For many years bench warmers have been attending church to criticize. Many people just come to church to say that they came. Those beach warmers need to give up the seat and give it to a person that wants to receive a word from the Lord. There are a lot of bench warmers that come to church today.

There are hypocrites in the church today. Hypocrites are pretending to be something while actually being something else. For example, a person trying to be Christ-like. In today’s church, there are a lot of hypocrites that are playing church and they are not fooling God. One day, if the hypocrites do not start being true Christians, they will be held accountable for their mistakes.

This would be a good lesson for non-believers.

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