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Coffeena

by Korting
(Colombia)

Original Text: Coffeena

Unfortunately we can not participate in COFFEENA due to that the narco-gerrilla and the drug traffickers are once again in our region Cauca, Colombia creating insecurity and making this a war area.
Farmers have risks in supplying our needs and this will pull us out of the market, therefore we can not make any compromise during the COFFEENA show.
We hope that you can understand our situation and sadness for not being able to participate in this fare.

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Revised Text:

Unfortunately, we can not participate in COFFEENA due to the fact that the narco-guerrillas and the drug traffickers are once again in our region; Cauca, Colombia, creating insecurity and making this a war area.

Farmers face risks in supplying our needs and this will pull us out of the market. We can not make an exception for the COFFEENA show.

We hope that you can understand our situation and sadness for not being able to participate in this fair.

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