College

Original Text: College


Although some believe the Yellow Suits strategy does not represent the high academic standards of Walsh, I believe the strategy has helped the College in spreading its awareness, because many people did not about the College.

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Revised Text:


Although some believe the Yellow Suits strategy does not represent the high academic standards of Walsh, I believe the strategy has helped increase awareness of the College, because many people did not about it before.


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