Cover-letter

by Nina
(UK)

Original Text: Cover-letter


I would like to apply for supported housing jobs through agencies.

I have not had experience of working as a such, but have worked with homeless people working with vulnerable groups including people of mental health problems or at risk of developing mental issue in a voluntary capacity and had the following trainings.

Housing Rights and Community Care
Welfare Benefits
Mental Health training
Protecting vulnerable adults
Child protection

And recently completed NVQ in understanding domestic violence.

I need help with phrasing the cover-letter as my English is not that good (yes, I went British University and been here for a long time but have not had a lot of opportunities to practise my writing or even my spoken English).

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Revised Text:

I would like to apply for a supported housing job with your agency.

I have not had experience working as such, but have worked with homeless people and with vulnerable groups, including people with mental health problems or who were at risk of developing mental issues. This was in a voluntary capacity and I received the following training.

Housing Rights and Community Care
Welfare Benefits
Mental Health training
Protecting vulnerable Adults
Child Protection

I also recently completed NVQ in Understanding Domestic Violence.

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