Curacao 2

by Guillermo
(Colombia)

Original Text: Curacao 2


I confirm our telephone conversation of this morning.
I do not endorse, I neither am an associate nor have business with Colonel xxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxx of Venezuelan nationality, for which I neither accept any bank deal on behalf of in my account, accounts of societies where I am an associate I nor serve as reference to the opening of any type of account or bank operation on behalf of either.
Serve the present notification for this route as notification and the original one properly signed which was sent by DHL.
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Names, addresses and personal identifications are deleted for privacy reasons.
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Revised Text:

I am confirming our telephone conversation of ...........

I do not endorse, and am neither an associate nor have any business with Colonel xxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxx of Venezuelan nationality. I do not accept any bank dealings from this source on behalf of my account, accounts of societies where I am an associate or serve as reference, to the opening of any type of account or bank operation on behalf of either.

Accept this communication by this route as notification of the original one, properly signed, which was sent by DHL.
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