e-commerce

by Maryam
(Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia)

Original Text: e-commerce


In recent decade electronic commerce is basically changed to conduct the various way of business. The effect on e-commerce on business has been huge. Products and services can be transferred by e-commerce science and they are sold and delivered to customer. There are some effective uses of e-commerce tools and techniques organizations; not only help their business process but also can add value for their customers

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Revised Text:

In recent decades electronic commerce has basically changed the conduct of various businesses. The effect of e-commerce on business has been huge. Products and services can be transferred by e-commerce science, they are sold and delivered to customers. There are some effective uses of e-commerce tools and techniques, not only to help the business process but also to add value for the customers.

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