Editing

by Lydia
(Texas)

Original Text: Editing

as they complete there tour of washington d.c. warrens family pause on the steps of the lincoln memorial for won last picture his mom gets everyone attention and snap the picture on the count of three mom warn everyone not to move becuz she want another shot

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Revised Text:

As they complete their tour of Washington D.C., Warren's family pauses on the steps of the Lincoln Memorial for one last picture. His mom gets everyone's attention and snaps the picture on the count of three. Mom warns everyone not to move because she wants another shot.

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