Education

by Laquilla
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Original Text: Education


According to the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics, Elementary school counselors provide individual, small-group, and classroom guidance services to students. Counselors observe children during classroom and play activities and confer with their teachers and parents to evaluate the children's strengths, problems, or special needs. In conjunction with teachers and administrators, they make sure that the curriculum addresses both the academic and the developmental needs of students. Elementary school counselors assist elementary school children with the development of their academic growth, feeling of competence and confidences in their selves and as student learners. One of the many goals as an elementary school counselor is to lay down the foundation for the students to aid them in their growth (emotional and physical) to become the next generation leaders.

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According to the U.S. Bureau of Labor Statistics, Elementary School counselors provide individual, small-group, and classroom guidance services to students. Counselors observe children during classroom and play activities and confer with their teachers and parents to evaluate the children's strengths, problems, or special needs.

In conjunction with teachers and administrators, they make sure that the curriculum addresses both the academic and the developmental needs of students. Elementary school counselors assist the school children with the development of their academic growth, feelings of competence, confidence in themselves, and as student learners. One of the many goals of an elementary school counselor is to lay down the foundation to aid the students in their growth (emotional and physical), to become the next generation of leaders.

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After read this post i feel that the US Education system is very strong and especially Elementary school counselors did work good to analyze the natural skills of children. In all US education schools a separate made where teacher give the free to the students then observe the interest of children.

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