Equipping Women

by Angela Reid
(London)

Original Text: Equipping Women


Through individual advice & guidance, each learner will be supported through a thorough skills audit and Individual learning plan (ILP). To make an informed choice on the learning stream they would prefer.

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Revised Text:

With individual advice & guidance, each learner will be supported through a thorough skills audit and Individual Learning Plan (ILP). This will help them make an informed choice on the learning stream they would prefer.

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