Essay 2

Original Text: Essay 2

The relationship between Matt and Kate started to gradually mend as Kate realized that the standards she used to judge Matt were beyond ones capability and therefore, wrong.

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The relationship between Matt and Kate had gradually started to mend when Kate realized that the standards she used to judge Matt were beyond her capability, and therefore, wrong.


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