Essay 3

Original Text: Essay 3


Our St. Francis traveled throughout land sharing “The Word of God”, meanwhile other individuals live day by day with no meaning, no strive, no inspiration; Individuals rather carry a gun for killings, and live unhappy; who are you in this world, and are you being deceiving or are you making a difference?

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Our St. Francis traveled throughout the land sharing “The Word of God”. Meanwhile, other individuals live day to day with no meaning, no striving and no inspiration. Individuals would rather carry a gun for killing and live unhappily.

Who are you in this world, and are you being deceiving, or are you making a difference?

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