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Experience
by Lisa Pan
My husband and I were deeply impressed by each other on our first meeting. As colleagues, we had usually had meals and played; but we were not lovers then. We were so implicit that we could only unrequitedly love each other. After my husband got a visa for studying in Canada, our friends held a farewell party for him ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Revised Text: My husband and I were deeply impressed by each other at our first meeting. As colleagues, we had usually had meals and played together, but we were not lovers then. We were so reticent that we could only have an unrequited love. After my husband got a visa for studying in Canada, our friends held a farewell party for him. Editor: 1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed. 2. Before you leave this page, please take a moment to use the "Click here to post comments." link at the bottom of the page to rate the proofreading and leave a comment if you wish. Proofreading and editing pages that receive ratings and comments are moved to the top of the list. Click here to read or post comments. |