Forecast

Original Text: Forecast


As we all know that Japan is experiencing a devastating situation due to the earthquake and tsunami. Our hearts are full for the losses of so many and reach out to them by prayer and help.

I myself is amassed that how the Japanese people has sustained during the course of this natural disaster and strongly believe that they will undertake reconstruction and put themselves on their feet again soon. It is expected that our industry will endure some level of impacts during their rebuild. Some major material used in our products are supplied by Japan and expected to face a severe shortage in the coming month or two. The shortage will not be filled in until end of this year or beginning of next year. Though almost gladly anticipate the material shortage situation to happen, I also want to be able to serve my customers with the least distraction possible. ALP is trying to accomplish that by purchasing as much the material as we may financially afford.

The following is a table with forecast information of the parts purchased regularly from ALP. Please fill in and send back to me as a reference. However, ALP strongly urges you to place PO accordingly in order to really secure your part of material for production. Without a PO in place, ALP will not be able to guarantee your portion of material.

Should you have any further question, please let me know.

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Revised Text:

As we all know, Japan is experiencing a devastating situation due to the earthquake and tsunami. Our hearts are pained by the losses of so many, and reach out to them by prayer and help.

I, myself, am amazed at how the Japanese people have sustained during the course of this natural disaster, and strongly believe that they will undertake reconstruction and put themselves on their feet again soon.

It is expected that our industry will endure some level of impact during their rebuilding. Some major materials used in our products are supplied by Japan and we expect to face severe shortages in the coming month or two. These shortages will not be made up until the end of this year or the beginning of next year. Although, almost gladly having anticipated the material shortage situation, I also want to be able to serve my customers with the least disruption possible.

ALP is trying to accomplish this by purchasing as much of the materials as we may financially afford.

The following is a table with forecast information for the parts purchased regularly from ALP. Please fill in, and send back to me as a reference. Also, ALP strongly urges you to place PO's accordingly in order to firmly secure your portion of the materials for production.

Without a PO in place, ALP will not be able to guarantee your supply of these materials.

Should you have any further questions, please let me know.

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