Foreign Worker

by Ramona
(Victoria, Mahe SEYCHELLES)

Original Text: Foreign Worker


Reference is made to your letter undated, pertaining to the above subject matter.

We wish to advise you that you should comply with all the requirement of the Immigration Division before coming to the Agricultural Agency for a support letter.

Thank you for your understanding and cooperation

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Revised Text:

In reference to your letter, undated, pertaining to the above subject matter.

We wish to advise you that you should comply with all the requirements of the Immigration Division before coming to the Agricultural Agency for a support letter.

Thank you for your understanding and cooperation.

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