Grammar and Punctuation

Original Text: Grammar and Punctuation


I am a proactive individual and a team player able to detect improvement potential and excel at working in a fast pace environment.

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Revised Text:

I am a proactive individual and a team player, able to detect improvement potential, and I excel at working in a fast paced environment.

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