Grammer Help

Original Text:


Mark will not be able to attend Saturday's game. Mark really wants to be at the game however we have to leave to Yuma on a family matter right after Fridays game and I don't have any one were Mark can stay or take him to the game of Saturday.

Editor:

Mark will not be able to attend Saturday's game.

He really wants to be at the game but we must leave for Yuma on a family matter right after Friday's game and I don't have any one for Mark to stay with and who could take him to the game on Saturday.


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