Hello!

Original Text: Hello!


I feel that it would be useful for me to take French classes instead. Anne and i have applied for french classes on thurdays from 12:15 to 1:15 pm.

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Revised Text:

I feel that it would be useful for me to take French classes instead. Anne and I have applied for french classes on Thursdays from 12:15 to 1:15 pm.

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