HOA

by Graham Lang
(Spokane)

Original Text: HOA


The adjoining members of Sundance Village to Ponderosa Ridge want to thank for agreeing to the landscaping terms. They, we would still be interested in any further discussions regarding the shared costs of replacing the fence. So there, maybe my being the spokesperson for the HOA are over but for some reason I don't think they will let me off the hook that easy. In any event, thanks again and I will see you tomorrow.

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Revised Text:

The members of Sundance Village, adjoining Ponderosa Ridge, want to thank for agreeing to the landscaping terms. We would still be interested in further discussions regarding the shared costs of replacing the fence.

My being the spokesperson for the HOA may be finished, but for some reason I don't think they will let me off the hook that easily. In any event, thanks again and I will see you tomorrow.


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