I need help to format this sentence structure below.

by Edwin
(Zambia)

I need help to format this sentence structure below.


According to Brooks & Watkins (1994), Collaborative inquiry (CI) which is one of the several participatory and action based inquiry methods, is an innovative way of improving practice and development of new knowledge, especially in the fields of education, Health, community development and organizational studies. (Brooks & Watkins 1994).

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According to Brooks & Watkins (1994), Collaborative Inquiry (CI), one of the several participatory and action based inquiry methods, is an innovative way of improving practice and development of new knowledge, especially in the fields of education, Health, community development and organizational studies. (Brooks & Watkins 1994).

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