It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain an idea without accepting it.

by Jane White
(Tennessee)

Original Text: It is the mark of an educated mind to be able to entertain an idea without accepting it.


I've always heard " the mind is a terrible thing to waste". An educated mind is always trying to find out how to make things better.

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Revised Text:

I've always heard, "The mind is a terrible thing to waste." An educated mind is always trying to find out how to make things better.

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