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Job Interview

by Malica
(Tennesse)

Original Text: Job Interview

Thank you for taking your time to discuss Case Management Specialist position. I am further convinced that my background and skills match well with the requirements. Also thank you for let me share with you about my son. Raising special child is challenging however it gives me an excellent life experience tools.
Using the knowledge I am certain I will bring excellent work habits and judgment to this position.
I look forward to hearing from you concerning your hiring decision. Again, thank you for your time and consideration.

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Revised Text:

Thank you for taking the time to discuss the Case Management Specialist position with me. I am further convinced that my background and skills are a good match for your requirements.

Also, thank you for letting me share with you about my son. Raising a special child is challenging, but it has given me excellent life experience tools. Using this knowledge, I am certain that I will bring excellent work habits and judgment to this position.

I look forward to hearing from you concerning your hiring decision. Again, thank you for your time and consideration.

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