Job

by Jessica
(Ferreira)

Original Text: Job


Plans, coordinates, manage, and supervises the finance related activities of the Finance and Accounting Department in conformance with established Bank strategies, policies and procedures. All managers of OSCB are expected to support OSCB efforts designed to understand, measure, monitor, reduce, control and report risk in the most efficient and cost-effective manner. Risk management includes but is not limited to compliance risk, credit risk, liquidity risk, market risk, operations risk and systems risk as well as attention to physical building safety and security. Performs any functions necessary, within scope of authority and expertise, to provide the highest level of service and responsiveness to customers. Provide leadership, supervision and training to the Senior Financial Analyst Officer (direct report). Work effectively with SVP/Controller and Accounting staff to accomplish some of the tasks above. Also work effectively with other areas of the Company. Evaluate current department software and workflows. Ensure that systems are being maximized and efficiencies are being met without compromising internal controls and regulatory requirements. Oversee the development of financial-related PowerPoint presentations used in communicating to internal/external customers. Participate in community activities to benefit local charitable and non-profit organizations.

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Revised Text:

• Plans, coordinates, manages, and supervises the finance related activities of the Finance and Accounting Department in conformance with established Bank strategies, policies and procedures.

• All managers of OSCB are expected to support OSCB efforts designed to understand, measure, monitor, reduce, control and report risk in the most efficient and cost-effective manner.

Risk management includes but is not limited to compliance risk, credit risk, liquidity risk, market risk, operations risk and systems risk, as well as attention to physical building safety and security.

• Performs all functions necessary, within scope of authority and expertise, to provide the highest level of service and responsiveness to customers.

• Provides leadership, supervision and training to the Senior Financial Analyst Officer (direct report).

• Works effectively with SVP/Controller and Accounting staff to accomplish the tasks above. Also works effectively with other areas of the Company.

• Evaluates current department software and workflows and ensures that systems are being maximized and efficiencies are being met without compromising internal controls and regulatory requirements.

• Oversees the development of financial-related PowerPoint presentations used in communicating to internal/external customers.

• Participates in community activities to benefit local charitable and non-profit organizations.

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