Kitchen

by Baminie
(Canada)

Original Text:


Kitchen is one of the most used rooms in a home. People decorated their kitchen in a way that is useful and visually attractive. First of all, people make their kitchens different variety of sight. My home kitchen is U’ shape and it is small. When you enter into my home kitchen first you can see in left side there is long counter top it made by wood. Tap water sink is middle of the counter top it made by silver. The dish washer install under the end side of the counter top. The kitchen cupboard attach above the left side wall. Middle side corner there is refrigerator and one round shape table. On top of the table I put fruit basket and breakfast foods. After that you can see right side of middle another entrance to the kitchen. Followed by the entrance you can see another small marble counter top. I put coffee maker, toaster, and mixture. Top of the right side wall there is another small cupboard for microwave. Next, the stove built right in to the counter top and wall space use by a contemporary shelving unit holding spices and tools. The kitchen arrangement is simple and nice look. It can provide accommodate chairs and table in the same room. Also, the kitchen benefits from lack of space when using two adjacent walls. The sink, range and refrigerators can be separate by preparation area. In addition, I make different variety of food. It can leave strong smells on the hands and in the kitchen such as onion, garlic, fish, calamari, and so on. I use a pot of water on to boil with cinnamon, cloves, maybe a slice or two of lemon; it can remove the food smell in kitchen. An aromatic candle also works for the kitchen smell. Moreover, I make different country food it can give different taste such as sweetness, bitterness, sourness, and saltiness. Furthermore, in kitchen appliances can make different kind of sounds. For example, refrigerator, microwave, and fan on the top of stove can make variety of sounds. People use variety of touches in their kitchens. For example, people use granite or wood for their kitchen counter top. Also, there are lots of wood and color selection for kitchen cabinets. In conclusion, kitchen is most important room in house because for food preparation, cleaning food and dish washing.

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Revised Text:

The kitchen is one of the most used rooms in a home. People decorate their kitchens in a way that is useful and visually attractive. First of all, people give their kitchens a variety of looks.

My home kitchen is 'U' shaped, and is small. When you enter my home kitchen, first you see a long counter top made of wood on left side. The tap water sink is in the middle of the counter top,and is made of silver. The dish washer is installed under the end of the counter top. The kitchen cupboard is attached above counter, on the left side wall.

In the middle corner, there is refrigerator and one round table. On top of the table, I put a fruit basket and breakfast foods. On the right side, is another entrance to the kitchen. By the entrance, you can see another small marble counter top. I put the coffee maker, toaster, and mixer there. On the right side wall there is another small cupboard for the microwave. Next, the stove is built right into the counter top and the wall space has a contemporary shelving unit, holding spices and tools.

The kitchen arrangement is simple and has a nice look. It can accommodate chairs and the table in the same room. Also, the kitchen makes up for the lack of space by using two adjacent walls. The sink, range and refrigerators can be separated from the preparation area.

I make many different varieties of food and they can leave strong smells, such as onion, garlic, fish, calamari, and so on, on the hands and in the kitchen. I use a pot of water to boil cinnamon, cloves, and maybe a slice or two of lemon; it can remove the food smell in the kitchen. An aromatic candle also works for the kitchen smell.

I also make different country style foods that have different tastes such as; sweetness, bitterness, sourness, and saltiness. Kitchen appliances can also make different kinds of sounds. For example, the refrigerator, microwave, and fan on the top of stove make a variety of sounds.

People use a variety of touches in their kitchens. For example, people use granite or wood for their kitchen counter tops. Also, there are lots of wood and color selections for kitchen cabinets.

In conclusion, the kitchen is most important room in my house for food preparation, cleaning food and dish washing.

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