Letter 5

Original Text: Letter 5


Regarding your message which indicates that The Faculty of Law and Management have requested further information relating to my previous research by providing you further evidence of a thesis, or equivalent writing at my earliest convenience. I would like to notify you that the MPA program at the University of Maine at that time had required a midterm papers and final term papers for each of the 45 courses, therefore I did not have an opportunity to write thesis. Moreover, I have searched for any of my midterm papers or final papers but unfortunately I did not find them due to the long past years.

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Revised Text:

Regarding your message, which indicates that The Faculty of Law and Management have requested further information relating to my previous research and require providing further evidence of a thesis, or equivalent writing at my earliest convenience.

I would like to notify you that the MPA program at the University of Maine, at that time, required midterm and final term papers for each of the 45 courses, therefore I did not have an opportunity to write thesis.

Moreover, I have searched for any of my midterm and final papers but unfortunately I did not find any due to the long years passed.

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