Letter 6

Original Text: Letter 6


I am pleased to present my resume which detailed qualifications, accomplishments, skills and contributions I can make towards the future success of the organization. I believe that my broad-based knowledge and being a dedicated person makes me a qualified candidate for the Property Manager position. My extensive experience in dealing with process and procedure has prepared me for the challenges associated with the position. My goal is to utilize my experiences and knowledge towards the growth of an innovative organization such as yours.
As referenced in my resume, my background and skills will prove to be an effective match for the organization’s expectations. Working in such diverse environments over the past 3 years has allowed me to develop strong analytical and project management skills. Working for the past 3 years with Xxxx Xxxxxx, as Property Manager, I have acquired a multitude of skills including client relations, management operations, problem solving, budget preparation, and effective and efficient property management. During this time I have been responsible for streamlining internal processes and supporting business objections resulting in increased efficiency. The knowledge and experience I have gained as Property Manager at Xxxxxx Xxxx would make me an excellent choice for the Property Manager position.
I welcome the opportunity to discuss my experiences and qualifications with you in detail as well as how I may contribute to the organization’s immediate and long term goals. While I am confident that my experience has prepared me to work with your organization, I strongly believe that my positive attitude and excellent communication skills will allow me to be a valuable asset as well.

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Revised Text:

I am pleased to present my resume which details my qualifications, accomplishments, skills and the contributions I can make to the future success of the organization. I believe that my broad-based knowledge, and dedication makes me a qualified candidate for your Property Manager position.

My extensive experience in dealing with process and procedures has prepared me for the challenges associated with the position. My goal is to utilize my experiences and knowledge towards the growth of an innovative organization such as yours.

As referenced in my resume, my background and skills will prove to be an effective match for the organization’s expectations. Working in diverse environments over the past 3 years has allowed me to develop strong analytical and project management skills. Working for the past 3 years with Xxxx Xxxxxx, as Property Manager, I have acquired a multitude of skills including; client relations, management operations, problem solving, budget preparation, and effective and efficient property management. During this time I have been responsible for streamlining internal processes and supporting business objectives, resulting in increased efficiency. The knowledge and experience I have gained as Property Manager at Xxxxxx Xxxx will make me an excellent choice for the Property Manager position.

I welcome the opportunity to discuss my experiences and qualifications with you in detail, as well as how I may contribute to the organization’s immediate and long term goals. While I am confident that my experience has prepared me to work with your organization, I strongly believe that my positive attitude and excellent communication skills will allow me to be a valuable asset as well.

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