Letter To My Wife

by James
(South Africa)

Original Text: Letter To My Wife


please forgive me for all .putting myself to shape(discipline) is the master tool for all that is going to happen in the future.please,always exercise patience and try not to let anger overcome you.i hold no grudge against you.i love you even more and for sure it will never change.remember God in every thing you do.stay blessed.

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Revised Text:

Please forgive me for everything. Disciplining myself is the master tool for all that is going to happen in the future. Please always exercise patience and try not to let anger overcome you. I hold no grudge against you. I love you even more and for sure, that will never change. Remember that God is in everything you do.

Stay blessed.


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