Letter

Original Text: Letter


From Benchmark of some American universities , ksu university and , Dr. Salma suggestion and by reviewing the CCNE document, I developed the attached manual
Kindly review the attached file. If you agree with this framework, we can discuss and correct it before the committee meeting

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I developed the attached manual after reviewing the CCNE document, using Dr. Salma's suggestions and benchmarks from some American universities and KSU.

Kindly review the attached file. If you agree with this framework, we can discuss and correct it before the committee meeting

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Writing formal letter is special thing...Good revision!

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