Life Tip

Original Text: Life Tip


life is worthwhile if you LEARN. What you don’t know WILL hurt you. You have to have learning to exist, let alone succeed. Life is worthwhile if you learn from your own experiences, negative and positive. We learn to do it right by first sometimes doing it wrong. We call that a positive negative. We also learn from other people’s experiences, both positive and negative. I’ve always said it is too bad failures don’t give seminars. We don’t want to pay them so they don’t tour around giving seminars. But the information would be very valuable – how someone who had it all, messed it up.

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Revised Text:

life is worthwhile if you LEARN. What you don’t know WILL hurt you. You have to have learning to exist, let alone succeed.

Life is worthwhile if you learn from your own experiences, both negative and positive. We learn to do right by sometimes first doing it wrong. We call that a positive negative.

We also learn from other people’s experiences, both positive and negative. I’ve always said, it is too bad failures don’t give seminars. We don’t want to pay them so they don’t tour around giving seminars, but the information would be very valuable – how someone who had it all, messed it up.

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