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Can you fix anything and make suggestions? Swamps, Rivers, Lakes, and Ponds Crawfish, Shrimp, and Lobsters too Singing and Dancing to Jazz and Blues While traveling around on the bayous Taking pictures in front of Louisiana’s Capitols And riding aboard the U.S. Kidd Then going to have fun at La’s State Fair While eating pink/blue cotton candy, enjoying barbequed polish sausages, and turkey legs Maybe even going to see some Rodeo Action And enjoying shopping at the La Boardwalk While also going to the malls too in La So come on by and take a trip to the “Bald Eagle” state of the world ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Editor: This is a bit of a stretch for me, I'm not a poet. My apologies in advance. Revised Text: Come on by the “Bald Eagle” state for Crawfish, Shrimp, and Lobsters too, Singing and Dancing to Jazz and the Blues. Snapshots in front of Louisiana’s Capitol, And coming aboard the USS Kidd. Shopping the La Boardwalk, and at the Malls too. Then going to have fun at La’s State Fair with pink cotton candy and blue cotton candy. Eating turkey legs and barbequed polish sausages, and enjoying some Rodeo Action too. Swamps, Rivers, Lakes, and Ponds, Traveling around on the bayous. Take a trip, and come on by. Editor: 1. Please review the text carefully to ensure your intended meaning was not mistakenly changed. 2. Before you leave this page, please take a moment to use the "Click here to post comments." link at the bottom of the page to rate the proofreading and leave a comment if you wish. Proofreading and editing pages that receive ratings and comments are moved to the top of the list. |