MAZAYA

Original Text:


MAZAYA successfully launched by AL ZAWRAE for tobacco and Cigarettes Trading Co. (the leading fleet for manufacturing, distributing and selling Molasses and cigarettes in the area).
Right from the start, MAZAYA has set new benchmarks with product innovations, opening up new potentials and market opportunities for the molasses industry.

We have now developed a completely innovative concept which gives premium purveyor quality, Packaging Design, Creativity, Variety and Best ever tobacco sources. When someone mentions MAZAYA, you probably think just of Molasses but there's a lot more than just Molasses in fact, MAZAYA basket overflows with a huge selection of Premium European Flavors.

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Revised Text:

MAZAYA has been successfully launched by AL ZAWRAE Tobacco and Cigarettes Trading Co., the leading company manufacturing, distributing and selling molasses and cigarettes in the area.

Right from the start, MAZAYA has set new benchmarks with product innovations, opening up new potentials and market opportunities for the molasses industry.

We have now developed a completely innovative concept which gives premium purveyor quality, packaging design, creativity, variety and the best ever tobacco sources.

When someone mentions MAZAYA, you probably think just of molasses but there's a lot more than just molasses. In fact, the MAZAYA basket overflows with a huge selection of Premium European Flavors.

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