Memo

by Ambachew
(Geneva)

Original Text: Memo


I am writing to kindly remind you that I am waiting to receive your assessments on the project reports.

preparing updates to the PSC/Board and feedback to the implementing partners would not be complete without your input.

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Revised Text:

I am writing to kindly remind you that I am still waiting to receive your assessments on the project reports.

Preparing updates to the PSC/Board, and feedback to the implementing partners, cannot be completed without your input.

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