Motivation Statement

by Neusha
(Tehran)

Original Text: Motivation Statement


I would like to apply for erasmus because I like to counties my study pursued my PhD, beside that I lived work Malaysia; I did MBA because I like research, business, and mean while they teach us so many things.
I can learn fast, I have a good assiduity, it was hard for me far from family, friends study in a country which you don't know any one you don't have friend but I did I finish my master and degree beside that I worked. I learn be strong.
My computer skill is great, my English is good, I attend English as a second language advance classes as well as advance conversational classes at San Mateo totally 220 hours. All my subject and exams during degree and master was in English, English is official language in Malaysia. I would like to do PhD or master, in e-commerce or international business, marketing, tourism, international marketing, brand management, knowledge management, business administration, my thesis was case study software protection comparison between Malaysia law and UK law. After I finish my course I would like to work in company as manager or teach to others student to research update my knowledge.

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Revised Text:

I would like to apply for Erasmus because I would like to continue my studies and pursue a PhD. I live and work in Malaysia and completed an MBA because I like research, business, and learning many things.

I can learn fast and have a good assiduity. It was hard for me being far from family and friends, studying in a country in which I didn't know anyone and didn't have friends but I did and I finished my Master's degree while I worked. I learned to be strong.

My computer skills are great and my English is good. I attended English as a Second Language advanced classes as well as advanced conversation classes at San Mateo for a total of 220 hours. All my subjects and exams for the Master's degree were in English, which is an official language in Malaysia. I would like to do a PhD or Master's degree in e-commerce or international business, marketing, tourism, international marketing, brand management, knowledge management or business administration. My thesis was a case study of software protection comparing Malaysian and UK laws.

After I finish my course I would like to work in a company as a manager or teach and do research to update my knowledge.

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