My Company

by Alenoosh
(Isfahan, Iran)

Original Text: My Company


Industrial drafting is a language of technique or a language of industry on which has been portraying and illustrating the engineers and designers thought.
Industrial language is the very language in engineering science which leads to illustrates the information clearly about the machines' segments and variety parts of structures.
Tarh Gostar Javan company is pleased to inform officially that it with considering international criterion and with qualified skilful personals' support on one hand, and with helpful expert colleagues cooperative on the other hand; it is honored to reveal that it has participated to complete the preparation of more than 30000 tones of drawing plan in different structures, and equipments in different Industries such as steel, cement, petrochemical and so on.

Information about company:
Preparation of variety workshop plans by considering all standard elements, such as; different heavy industrial structures, variety types of machines, industrial equipments, and different sorts of stocks, and etc.

Preparation of the best cutting arrangement to get maximum benefits of materials correspondences to design and employers need.
Drawing 3D plan with special drawing software
Conversion ability to exchange hand made plan to computer file for easy editing and processing.
To estimate a need material and revealing a shopping list for the Project, in advance.

Giving a report of material balancing and revealing the amount of leftover of consumable and non consumable materials to construction contractors.
Estimating of reconstructing expense in the case of change on construction's plan, during the work.
Done projects:
Current project:
Glorification:
Co-worker companies:
Employment:

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Revised Text:

Industrial drafting is a language of technique or a language of industry for portraying and illustrating engineers and designers thoughts.

Industrial language is the language of engineering science which enables the illustration of information clearly about machine parts and the segments of structures.

Tarh Gostar Javan company is pleased and honored to announce officially that, with consideration of international criterion and with qualified, skillful personnel support on one hand, and with helpful expert colleagues on the other, it has participated in completing the preparation of more than 30,000 tons of drawing plans for structures and equipment in Industries including steel, cement, petrochemical and others.

Information about company:
Preparation of a variety of workshop plans by considering all standard elements, such as; different heavy industrial structures, a variety of types of machines, industrial equipment, and different sorts of stocks, etc.

Preparation of the best cutting arrangement for maximum benefits of materials corresponding to design and employers needs.

Drawing 3D plans with special drawing software and conversion ability to transfer hand made plans to computer files for easy editing and processing.

Estimating in advance material needs and creating a shopping list for the Projects.

Giving a report of material balancing and revealing the amount of leftovers of consumable and non-consumable materials to construction contractors.

Estimating of reconstructing expenses in the case of changes in construction's plans during the work.

Completed projects:
Current project:
Glorification:
Co-worker companies:
Employment:

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