My Job

by No Name Given

Original Text:


my job

Job is an important part of your lives. Everyone spends most of their time at work. Shouldn't it be interesting then?
What is a job for me?
If's a fullfillment of tasks in a proper manner. At work I want to develop my personal skills and constantly learn more.
It's impossible to continue working here while you lack respect to your boss and fill complete stagnation.
I think that there will be a time when everyone will be able to find the right place.

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Revised Text:

My Job

Your job is an important part of your life. Everybody spends most of their time at work. Shouldn't it be interesting?

What is a job to me? It's a fulfillment of tasks in a proper manner. At work I want to develop my personal skills and constantly learn more.

It's impossible to continue working here while you lack respect for your boss and feel complete stagnation.

I think there will be a time when everyone will be able to find the right place.


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