New Release

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Document 1-New Release (page 103)
For Immediate Release
CONTACT:
Steve Meredith
Scholarship Chair, Clarksville BPPA
931-555-0152
smeredith@charter.net

Clarksville Business and Professional Persons of America to Award Scholarships Clarksville business and professional persons of America is pleased to announce that their organization will be awarding a total of $3,500 in scholarships at its April 20—Guest Night. The club is able to make these awards as the result of a highly successful National Business and Professional Persons of America Week Scholarship Luncheon in October, 20--.

Scholarships to be awarded are:

• 2 $750 scholarships to persons age twenty five and older as of February 28, 20—
• 2 $500 scholarships to members of the Central High School Class of 20—
• 2$500 scholarships to upperclassmen (students who have already started college and are at any any level)

All applicants must provide an official academic transcript with the application and have and maintain a 3.0 GPA. Other qualifications are outliend in the application form.

Applications are available on our Web site at www.clarksvillebppa.org. Applications are also available at Central High School, Boone County College Office of Financial Aid, or be contacting committee chair Steve Meredith at 931-555-0152 or smeredith@charter.net and must be postmarked on or befor Feburary 28, 20--

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Document 1-News Release (page 103)

For Immediate Release

CONTACT:
Steve Meredith
Scholarship Chair, Clarksville BPPA
931-555-0152
smeredith@charter.net

Clarksville Business and Professional Persons of America to Award Scholarships

The Clarksville Business And Professional Persons Of America is pleased to announce that their organization will be awarding a total of $3,500 in scholarships at its April 20—Guest Night.

The club is able to make these awards as the result of a highly successful National Business and Professional Persons of America Week Scholarship Luncheon in October, 20--.

Scholarships to be awarded are:

• two $750 scholarships to persons age twenty five and older as of February 28, 20—
• two $500 scholarships to members of the Central High School Class of 20—
• two $500 scholarships to upperclassmen (Students who have already started college and are at any level.)

All applicants must provide an official academic transcript with the application and have, and maintain, a 3.0 GPA. Other qualifications are outlined on the application form.

Applications are available on our Web site at www.clarksvillebppa.org. Applications are also available at Central High School, Boone County College, Office of Financial Aid or be obtained by contacting committee chair Steve Meredith at 931-555-0152 or smeredith@charter.net.

Applications must be postmarked on or befor Feburary 28, 20--

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