News

Original Text: News


Hi Karla,
I hope you are doing well and I hope you don’t mind I share this e-mail with you.
I thought it would be like a remedy for Lisa’s heart if this news goes to Mary’s attention.
Love,
Lilia

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Revised Text:

Hi Karla

I hope you are doing well, and I hope you don’t mind my sharing this e-mail with you.

I thought it would be like a remedy for Lisa’s heart if this news went to Mary’s attention.

Love,
Lilia

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